The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided figure illustrates the primary types of power production
such
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as petroleum, natural gas and coal in Britain from 1981 until 2000.
Overall
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, it is clearly evident that both petroleum and natural gas witnessed an increase over the entire time.
However
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, producing coal saw a downward trend over time.
According to
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what is shown in the graph petroleum began in 1981 with just below 100
million
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barrels of oil. After that increased slightly to reach about 140
while
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remaining stable until 1987 it dropped dramatically to hit around 100.
Moreover
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, it faced an increase between 1992
until
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and
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2000 and reached 140
million
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tanks in total.
Whereas
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, natural gas remained relatively stable between 1981
to
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and
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1989 around 40
million
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tonnes and faced a significant increase to hit just above 100 in 2000.
On the other hand
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, coal saw a sharp drop It started at about 80
million
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tonnes and decreased to just under 40
million
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barrels . It increased to reach 60
million
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and after
that
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that,
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it stayed steady for 4 periods of time.
However
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, coal experienced a steady decline to reach roughly around 38
million
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barrels in 2000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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