You have arranged a plan for travel and accommodation for your friends. Write a letter to them and: - Remind them about the plans, - Give them the details of accommodation, - Suggest what things they should bring to the trip.

Hi Karan and Mohit, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and great spirits. I am writing

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letter to remind you about our upcoming trip to

Tobermory

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the Tobermory

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Islands, in Northern Ontario. I have made all the arrangements. You, me and Karan will go

via

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road in my car. The most attractive spot over there is the Islands, there are a number of islands

flowerpot

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Flowerpot Island

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island

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tree

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Tree Island

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island

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snake

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Snake Island

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island

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etc. We will have a ferry and go to the flowerpot

island

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and on our ferry route we will have a closer look at the ship, that sank in the water in the 18th century. It is still visible as the water is so clear in that river. We will stay 15 kilometres away from

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spot. I have booked a trailer with 3 rooms, 2 washrooms and 1 big hall, where we can have fun. There is a beach too near our living area. so we will go over there, the next day. I recommend you guys

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come equipped with trekking shoes and clothes as on the

island

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there is a complete trek, and in between there will be great eye-catching spots. I am really looking forward to

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trip. Let me know if you have any questions regarding anything. Yours truly, Mohit

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs for better clarity.

task achievement

Try to include more details about the journey, such as the travel time, to enhance the complete response.

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The letter has a friendly tone which is appropriate for writing to friends.

task achievement

You provided specific details about the destination and accommodation which helps readers understand the plan.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

217 words

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You have arranged a plan for travel and accommodation for your friends. Write a letter to them and: - Remind them about the plans, - Give them the details of accommodation, - Suggest what things they should bring to the trip.

The Greeting

An Australian company offers money to foreign students to study in Australia. Write a letter to company.

In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partners. Discuss both systems and state which you think is better.

Nowadays, many people have to work longer hours, and they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their employees' lives easier?

Many species of animals have become extinct in recent times. What are the causes of this? What are some possible solutions?