The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Tha
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The
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map graph illustrates three
diffirenet
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different
eras A,B and C for
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the constucted
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constucted
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constructed
lesiure
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leisure
centre.
Overall
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, A located in
industrial
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an industrial
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area
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sorunded
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surrounded
by
river
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rivers
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and main
roud
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roads
,
while
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B
placed
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is located
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in
residentila
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residential
buildings .
Wheares
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Whereas
C
located
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in
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a specious
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specious
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spacious
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rural
area
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. A is located in the east of the map and it is in an
indurtial
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industrial
area
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near to a large river and
roud
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road
round
.
This
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location may have
alot
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a lot
of
noisy
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noise
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and pollution
due to
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the factory .
On the other hand
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, cite B is located on the northeast of the
digram
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diagram
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and it is an urban location,
has
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that has
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multiple
rouds
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rounds
routes
roads
.
In contrast
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, cite C is a rural
area
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with a specious
greenland
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Greenland
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without
acceccablity
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acceptability
and absence of water sources .

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • space constraints
  • costs
  • prime location
  • secluded
  • natural area
  • serene environment
  • remoteness
  • accessibility
  • transport facilities
  • advantageous
  • undisturbed leisure
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