The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the changes

of

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three types of electrical

appliances

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in ownership by proportion,

in

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cluding washing

machine

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machines

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,

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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and vacuum

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cleaners

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, which

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show the number of time that households spent on housework in a country

for

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between

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1920 and 2019.

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, the ownership of various types of electronic

appliances

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showed a

sharply increase

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trend,

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refrigerator

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has

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been the dominant

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these

appliances

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.

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, the working time of households presented a huge decline over the period from 1920 to 2019.

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with the electrical

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in 1920, the percentage of

using

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refrigerator

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has

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climbed

up

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rapidly from 0% to 90% within 40 years, which

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the usage of

others

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two

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appliances

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other appliances

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immediately.

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rose slightly

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the peak

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10% in 1980 and

remain

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remained

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unchage

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unchanged

until 2019.

Vacuum

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cleaner

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also

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had

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significant increase from 1920 to 2000, which expanded

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usage by 30% to 100%. Under comparison, the washing machine showed a milder increase than others, it started at 40% in 1920 and increased to around 72% in 2019. Meanwhile, the working hours of

household

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households

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decreased dramatically from 1920 to 1960,

which started

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in

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50% and

dropped

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dropping

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to 20%. After the massive decline

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working hours, it showed a

slowly

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fall over the period of

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after

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59 years relatively, which only decreased

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by 10

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% in total.