You have rented an apartment for five years. You have decided to move out. Write to the landlord. In the letter, Describe who you are and where you live Explain why you have decided to move out Suggest what you want the landlord to

Dear Mrs. Anna,

Iam

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I am

writing

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letter to inform you that I am moving out of my

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appartment

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apartment

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next week. First of all, I'm Jack, one of the

resident

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of your

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appartment

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apartment

, specifically my room at 4150 mainway burington buildings and who has been living here for about five years in your place. You were a very kind and friendly landlord.

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, I was

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truly

trully

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truly

satisfied

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facility your

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apartment

appartment

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apartment

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, fate says

otherwise

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, two days ago I got a job call in another country

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offers

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high

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salary, honestly it is mind for me to leave

this

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appartment

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apartment

because I

was

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got

convenient

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facility and

good

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relationship with you and

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my neighbors

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neighbors

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therefore

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I must

decided

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to move

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appartment

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apartment

to close with my job place

also

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there is

great

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job for my future. I

have

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paid for 2

month

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before to

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you

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by transfer, but I want you

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give me back

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that one month left,

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that money very essential and I need

for

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livingcost leter

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living costs

. I hope you understand

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my situation and I really appreciate

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you

repply

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short time Best regards, Jack

Arni AqlinaMon Jun 16 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to clearly state your request for the return of the remaining month's rent earlier in the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Use clearer paragraph breaks to separate your ideas, like your introduction, reason for moving, and your request.

coherence and cohesion

Correct spelling errors like 'appartment' to 'apartment' and 'trully' to 'truly'.

task achievement

You expressed your feelings about the landlord and the apartment clearly.

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Your tone is polite and respectful, which is good for a letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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