The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate data about the reasons why
people
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are cycling or driving to the office.
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, it can be seen that
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most
people
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is
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cycling to
work
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because of healthy and eco-friendly lifestyles.
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, the reasons of officers drive
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the car
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to
work
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are comfortable and long distances. On the one hand, behind the story of why
people
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come to the office by bicycle, fitness advantages and environmental issues
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30% of all responses, followed by an issue of parking areas (15%). The percentage of
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who said
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cost saving is 13%, and the other 12% because of faster.
On the other hand
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, the most significant reason for driving to
work
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is comfort with 40%. the second issue is the distance from home to
work
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is far with 21%. 14% of
people
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say it is because of faster
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cycling and the need to bring something. Safer than cycling has
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an 11
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% response.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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