The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the transformations of the town of Nelson between 2000 and the present day.
Overall
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, the
city
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became more modernized , cutting down some of the trees
while
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developing many residential areas and providing more options for transport routes. Between 2000 and the present day, there is the introduction of the new hall of residence to the northwest of the town.
Besides
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, the old train station was extended and moved to the
center
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centre
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of the
city
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. The old market
in
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on
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the left of the
city
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centre gives way to the new supermarket. The university is still there
while
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there was
an
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the
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appearance of a railway connected with the
city
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centre which now has
bike
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a bike
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rental service.
Moreover
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, the trees in the northeast corner of the
city
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were cut down and a mall was built. In the southeast of the map, there is the new covered market established for residents. The path for vehicles in the 2000 made way for pedestrians only. Between the road and the port are the construction of the restaurant to the southwest and the entertainment area to the southeast.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential
  • commercial
  • green spaces
  • public transport
  • urbanization
  • de-urbanization
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • industrial
  • transformation
  • recent times
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • key features
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