The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, some

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believe that the best approach to mitigating heavy

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is reducing the opportunities for citizens to go out.

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opinion is partly true because the need to go outside itself is the main factor causing

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problem.

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essay, I will explain why I moderately support

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statement.

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with, we need to acknowledge that there are several reasons for

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to travel from home to somewhere and that the extent of

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of those purposes is not always the same.

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, when students go to their schools, the main

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would be to receive an education, from a wider perspective.

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, focusing on the details, it becomes obvious that specific purposes are different among those

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.

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means that some of them would hope to obtain knowledge from the lectures held there and

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others would want to acquire societal skills, including communication skills, through daily conversations.

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, for some students, schooling in physical institutions plays an important role because it has been proved that in-person communications are more effective for

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to enhance their

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skills compared to online ones.

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,

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principle can be applied to workplaces because employees learn numerous things from their colleagues or seniors there as well.

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, regulating these essential opportunities lacks rationality, even if the regulation itself aims to mitigate heavy

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.

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, as some

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argue, some activities can be sacrificed

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the amount of

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.

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,

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shopping is one of the unnecessary behaviours nowadays

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technological advancements. Specifically, we can obtain any information and purchase any product on the internet now regardless of the type of product.

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, actions

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as driving to supermarkets or other stores become less rational choices.

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, if a specific city is struggling with the amount of

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and that city has the well-constructed internet, shopping

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should be limited, especially during the time when the

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is comparatively heavy. In conclusion,

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some aspects,

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as education and jobs, are essential for citizens, shopping behaviour has a meaningless aspect.

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, I consider that

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regulations should be enforced on travel for specific purposes

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as shopping.

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reason, I moderately agree with the initial statement.