The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the statistics of
contribution
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contributions
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to a range of developing nations by five organizations in terms
of
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between
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2008,2009,2010 and 2010 years.
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, as can be seen from the graph, the
second
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and third organizations accounted for higher rates of money,
while
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remained ones showed relatively similar contributions. It is evident, that the highest amount was given by the
second
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organization, particularly in 2010 and 2011. The figure for the
second
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organization
estimated
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below 1.5 billion in 2008 before increasing significantly and reaching the greatest ratio at over 2.5 billion in 2011. In terms of
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third
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the third
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, the amount was slightly identical to the
second
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despite the fluctuations throughout the period between 1.5 and 1.8 billion. Moving to the remained figures, moderate reductions were recorded, particularly in
5th
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the 5th
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organization which represented higher
fundings
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funding
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to improving continents in 2008 compared to
other
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others
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words second with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • amount of money
  • developing countries
  • organisations
  • from 2008 to 2011
  • given to
  • funding
  • analyze
  • examine
  • discuss
  • evaluate
  • explore
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • trends
  • data
  • chart
  • purpose
  • overview
  • key findings
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