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Band 3.5

You have just read an article in a national newspaper which clamis that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - say which point in the article you agree with - explain ways in which your town centre in different from most other town centres. - offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir, I hope
this
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 email finds you in your best
sprits
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spirits
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. I'm writing
this
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 letter in response to your editorial published
on
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apply
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last
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sunday
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Sunday
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on
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apply
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stating
town
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 centres in my country
they
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apply
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all look like
to
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apply
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each other, to which I
partically
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particularly
partially
 agree with you though I do have some pointers to
discussed
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discuss
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 on. In
the
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apply
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light of the above comment, I would like to continue and say that in terms of
there
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their
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indivisual intendity
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individual identity
 they all are different
form
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from
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 each other
cause
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causing
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 each one of them
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to sybolize
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sybolize
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symbolise
 a different story &
narate
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narrate
 a vibrant taste of
architure
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architecture
.
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, all of them are
build
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built
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 in different time
frame
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frames
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 and with different
agenda
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agendas
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.
Moreover
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, I'm in total favour of your
obeservation
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observation
observations
 of
there
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their
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maintance
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maintenance
. Which is not upto to
the
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apply
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par. All of them in terms of
there
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their
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cleaness
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cleanliness
 and facilities provided to
public
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the public
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 lack a lot. Even though my
town
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 centre is fully
distinguieshed
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distinguished
 from
majority
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the majority
a majority
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 of them as local people take
initative
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initiative
 to clean and
maintaine
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maintain
 the
town
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 centre and not just fully depended on
goverment
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government
 to look after it.
In addition
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 to that
its
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it
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 a one of the oldest
town
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centre
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centres
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 in the country
due to
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 which
its
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it
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 has a
unquie
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unique
 style of
infracture
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infrastructure
, design and
build
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building
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 structure. I would love to provide you a
glimspe
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glimpse
 of it through my
wiriting
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writing
, I hope
while
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 reading it you
would
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will
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 have a taste of it. The movement you leave the
railyway
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railway
 station you can
visual
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visualise
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 a historic style made wide
raods
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roads
 and all the
buildings
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building's
buildings'
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colour
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colours
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 are red to give a vintage look.
Place
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The place
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look
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looks
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extremly
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extremely
 clean and all the places are well organised by
catogories
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categories
 like
,
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apply
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offical
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official
 offices are at one side and markets are on the other. I hope you find
me
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my
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 pointer
vaild
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valuable
, looking forward to
hear
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hearing
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 from you. Thanks!

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to use clear paragraphs for each main idea. Each paragraph should focus on one point to help the reader follow your thoughts.
task achievement
Check for spelling mistakes and make sure you use the correct words. For example, use 'individual identity' instead of 'indivisual intendity'.
coherence and cohesion
Try to write in a more simple and clear way to connect with the reader. Use basic words for better understanding.
task achievement
You give a strong personal touch by offering a tour of your town to the writer, which adds a nice touch to your letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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