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Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some argue that requiring
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 to wear uniforms in some companies and organizations can be uncomfortable for some individuals.
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, I believe it is better to have uniforms, as they help prevent
employees
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 from wearing inappropriate clothing to
work
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, On the one hand, some companies, require
employees
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 to wear uniforms and some individuals feel uncomfortable wearing them, Maybe some ladies prefer to wear a skirt rather than pants, and some people find it hard to wear the same clothes all year, which can affect employee productivity and satisfaction,
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, McDonald’s usually wear the same
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, which can limit how they show their style.
This
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 lack of individuality can make workers unhappy if they want to dress differently. I believe that there are many cons and I do not agree with
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 because when we go to
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 we need to feel comfortable.
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, wearing the same clothes will help prevent
employees
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 from wearing inappropriate clothing to
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. Some people wear skinny jeans or tight clothing when they
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 and
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 not clothed is a match to go to the company.
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uniform
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 creates a professional look.
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, when patients see nurses in scrubs, they feel better knowing they are being helped by trained professionals. I believe that there are pros and I agree with
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 because some
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 helps to boost confidence in some people. In conclusion, there are several pros and cons,
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 it is dependent on whether the individuals prefer to wear a
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 or not. and I agree to wear it because that helps me to feel confident when I wear it.

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task achievement
Make sure every paragraph clearly supports your main idea. Try to expand your arguments with clearer examples.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words to make your ideas flow better. This will help readers follow your argument easily.
structure
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion that reflects your opinion.
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