More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremly difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How cana governments make urban life better for everyone?

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are often seen as places of
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, though city life can be way challenging. There are many drawbacks
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living in a metropolis,
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, it is my opinion that governments should do much more to improve the quality of life of the average inhabitants. One of the main problems that people face when willing to move to a large city is that the cost of living is much
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higher than living in small
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and villages. People spend a lot of money on housing, transportation and even food. Another significant
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that affects residents in
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urban
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is the social problems that are related to the high rate of
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and poverty.
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, the most recent report in Fox News showed a 5% increase in committing crimes in New York
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, and it was attributed to poverty
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areas
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particularly
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of Manhattan.
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,
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the fact that most inhabitants have their own cars,
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led to
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of
cities
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and air contamination leading to negative consequences on the environment.
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, there are
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various
steps that
goverment
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government
governments
should take to tackle
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issue
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.
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, states need to invest to construct social
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that will solve the problem of having to pay huge
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of money
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renting.
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, it would be practical to create provisional towns and rural
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to shift factories to
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places to reduce the
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of the
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, politicians have the power to apply
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on
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owners.
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will result in the reduction of using private cars and seeking public transportation.
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, the
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of
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and air pollution will be partially resolved to a certain extent. In
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conclusion,
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it is really troublesome for individuals to travel to major
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, certain actions can be applied by
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governments
to remedy
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issue
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and improve the quality of life of individuals.

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