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Band 2.5

: More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluting the countryside and ocean. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

Nowadays
plastic
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 waste
worry
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affeting
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affecting
 more countries.
Plastic
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 polluting mostly the area of sea and country. Cause of polycarbonate
increasing
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increases
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 cancer and skin allergies.
This
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 essay will discuss both problems and
solution
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solutions
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. Plastics are common in our countries.
Super market
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Supermarket
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 and bakery items are available in
plastic
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package
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packages
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. After the usage of
plastic
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 people
are simply threw
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are simply thrown
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 to earth.
Plastic
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 does not digest
in
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on
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 earth and it
cause
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causes
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 serious harm
in
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to
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nature. Polluting
plastic
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normal
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and normal
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 water from
environment
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the environment
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.
Humenbeing
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Humans are
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 affected
serious
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by serious
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 health issues
such
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 as cancer, skin allergies and
kidny deseas
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kidney diseases
.
Goverments
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Governments
 and authorities should make
a
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 order to ban all types of
plastic
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uses
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use
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.
Instead
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 of
plastic
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 may could produce paper
bag
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bags
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 and cloth
bag
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bags
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 to carry products from
margin free
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margin-free
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market
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markets
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 or all types of
market
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markets
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.
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This
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These
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 two changes would
make
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have
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 major benefits in our society and can avoid
plastic
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 problems from
whole
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the whole
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 world.
Also
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 WHO can provide a depict news to
avoiding
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avoid
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plastic
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products
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product
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uses
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use
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 to person to enhance their
awarness
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awareness
 of the problems of
plastic
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 in order to avoid
plastic
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uses
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use
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. All local government bodies
are introduce
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a non
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non plastic products
a non plastic product
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plastic
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 products to society and provide
a
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apply
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advertisement
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advertisements
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 from social media influencers
as well as
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celebraties
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celebrities
 of
consequences
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the consequences
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 of
plastic
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. It helps
citizen
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citizens
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 attention to
reduse
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reduce
plastic
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 usage.

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coherence and cohesion
Try to improve the structure of your essay. Use clear paragraphs. Start with an introduction, then write about problems, and finally give solutions.
task response
Use better vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. Some words need to be corrected or replaced for better understanding.
task response
Your examples should be more specific and detailed. For instance, explain more about how plastic affects health or what paper bags do instead.
task achievement
You have identified important problems related to plastic waste, such as health issues and environmental impact. This shows you understand the topic well.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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