The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported intothe European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003.

The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported intothe European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported intothe European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003.
The bar chart compares the average
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of clothing per
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for seven different countries who imported
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clothing into
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Europe
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in 1997 and 2003.


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, Tunisia ranked as the highest average
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per
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of clothing in 2003, accounting for approximately 14 euro, and 13 euro per
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of clothing in Morocco marked up for the highest average
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in 1997.
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, the country which was the lowest average
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in both years questioned was Bangladesh.


It is clear that
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the average
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per
kilo
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of clothing in Tunisia and Turkey was increasing from 1997 to 2003, with a substantial rise in Tunisia and a
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growth in Turkey. In Morocco, clothing per
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remained the same, which was about 18
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in the two years.


By contrast
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, the other four countries all experienced a reduction during the same period. Interestingly, the average
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they had reduced to was two-thirds of their original
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.

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