The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the steps and equipment involved

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how

ethanol

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fuel

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are

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made from

corn

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in the way of

corn

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which goes to transported as

fuel

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overall

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corn

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pass

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through 8 stages before getting transported as

ethanol

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fuel

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corn

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combined with water and Purifying

Ethanol

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to create the

fuel

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the process of making

ethanol

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fuel

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uses a number of tools, the production of

ethanol

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is simpler and requires only

corn

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the first stage of making

ethanol

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fuel

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are storing

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corn

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before goes into Milling.

corn

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combined with water throughout the cooking process

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up to 4 hours.

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we move to fermenting for 48 hours resulting

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solid and liquid separation in order to mix the liquid mixture with Purifying

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for about 5 hours. the resulting mixture is ready to be stored

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for transport the material in order

becoming

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the

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ethanol

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fuel

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