The table shows the carbon dioxide (CO2) production in five nations in 2005 and 2006.

The table shows the carbon dioxide (CO2) production in five nations in 2005 and 2006.
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The table illustrates the
production
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of carbon dioxide in 5 nations during 2005 and during 2006.
Overall
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, the US was the peak at average
production
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among 5 nations
with
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China
followed
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following
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behind as the
second,
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which
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and
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Russia and Japan came after,
while
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India was the lowest average. In 2005, the quantity of carbon dioxide
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in the US was the top at about 5900, and
production
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in China was the second at approximately 5600, and the other three countries were all below
2000
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2000,
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with Russia at 1699, India at 1200+ and Japan coming to 1100+.
In2006
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In 2006
, the figure of
production
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in China exceeded the US and became the largest nation of carbon dioxide
production
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with
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its amount increasing by 11%, reaching
at
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6000.
In addition
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, the
production
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in India increased by 8%. Meanwhile ,the amount in
US
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the US
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decreased by 2%, and came to 5000.
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, the amounts of
production
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in Russia and Japan
was
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stable and had no rate of change from 2005 to 2006.

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