The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the comparison of the amount of caffeine and tea that people purchase and drinking habits in five cities in Australia, Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart in the
last
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four weeks.
Overall
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, most residents in all cities, except
Adelaide
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, went to a café to have
coffee
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or tea.
In contrast
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, the lowest percentages belong to citizens who bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks. As is shown in the chart, more than 60% of people from Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart prefer to go to
coffee
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shops rather than
purchasing
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purchase
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fresh
coffee
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.
However
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, when it comes to
coffee
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habits, on average, almost fifty per cent of residents bought instant
coffee
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which had a huge gap (proximately 15% more) from buying fresh
coffee
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in Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart.
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, in both Brisbane and
Adelaide
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, just barely 35% of people bought fresh
coffee
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which was the minimum in all cities.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words adelaide, coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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