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The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts information about the
number
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 of automobiles manufactured in Argentina,
Australia
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, and Thailand between 2003 and 2009.
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,
cars
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 were produced the most in Thailand,
whereas
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 Argentina made the lowest
number
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 of
cars
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. Argentina produced the
least
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number
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 of
cars
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 in 2003 and the highest
number
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 of
cars
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 in 2009,
while
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 the car manufacturing levels of
Australia
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was
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were
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 greater in 2003 compared to its lowest levels in 2009. Thailand manufactured
majority
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the majority
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 of
cars
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 with 735,852, 1,162,356, and 999,963 respectively in the given time period with higher car manufacturing in 2006.
Conversely
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,
Australia
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 ranked second place.
This
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 country manufactured 452,163
cars
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 in 2003, 341,268
cars
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, and 245,624
cars
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 in 2009.
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, the manufacture of
cars
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 increased minimally from 352,759 in 2006 to 466,089 in
Australia
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, australia, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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