The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie charts illustrate the core reasons for migration from and to the UK in 2014.
Overall
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, formal study, definite job and others were more popular in
immigration
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whereas
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no reason stated, looking for work
as well as
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accompany or join were more attractive in
emigration
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.
In addition
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, formal study was consistently predominant and no reason stated had the lowest portion. Beginning with some core reasons why
immigration
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was attracted. With respect to formal study, the
figure
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for
emigration
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was slightly lower than for
immigration
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, at 28% and 31%, respectively.
Likewise
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, concerning definite jobs, the
figure
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modestly favoured
immigration
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over
emigration
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, amounting to 28%
in contrast
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with 26%. Concurrently, in terms of others , the gap between
immigration
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and
emigration
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was negligible, at 10% compared to 9%. Moving onto the remaining reasons in these pie charts. In connection with no reason stated, there was trivially more
emigration
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, at 8%, than
immigration
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at 7%.
Similarly
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, regarding looking for work, the
figure
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modestly favoured
emigration
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over
immigration
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, amounting to 15%
in contrast
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with 14%. Simultaneously, for accompany or join, the
figure
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for
emigration
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was palpably higher than for
immigration
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, at 14% and 10%, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words immigration, emigration, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "modestly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration
  • reasons
  • to/from
  • largest
  • smallest
  • categories
  • compare
  • similarities
  • differences
  • overview
  • patterns
  • suggest
  • in/around
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • economic
  • social
  • factors
  • work
  • study
  • family
  • lifestyle
  • education
  • opportunities
  • country
  • nation
  • movement
  • trends
  • data
  • information
  • chart
  • describe
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