The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates some changes that are to take place in the future in Norbiton. To be more precise, an industrial zone will undergo
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drastic transformation.
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, by far the most vivid change
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planned is factories giving way to houses.
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will provide more housing choices for future residents. If one looks thoroughly at the pictures, new facilities and places can be noticed.
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, there are shops and medical
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that will be positioned around the ring road. As for the factories, they will be de demolished, as
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has been mentioned before.
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of the industrial building that was
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of
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in the eastern part, there will be a school.
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, a playground will be constructed between two residential units on the northeastern side. The
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is a bridge in the centre of the river that will lead to another housing unit.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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