You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to take time off work -give details of the amount of time you need -suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Manager, I am writing
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letter to request
from
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you
for approving
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my
leaves
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leave
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for a short time. I am Rupinder Kaur who works as a customer service in your company. My
father
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is suffering from chest pain and Doctor has suggested a heart bypass surgery on 25th
may
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. My
father
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will
admit
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in
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an
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hospial
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hospital
on 23rd May. I am
single
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child of my parent. So I will have to take leave
for taking
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care of my
father
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. I need leave from 23rd May to 13th June. After surgery, my
father
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will need constant supervision for 20 days. My colleague Raman Singh will do my work in my absence. He
knowns
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very well about my duties.
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year, he
works
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in
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service department. I already talked to him and He has agreed to help me in
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situation. I am looking for positive consideration. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to include a more formal closing, such as 'Thank you for considering my request.'
task achievement
Clarify some phrases to improve understanding, like 'the Doctor suggested' instead of 'Doctor has suggested'.
task achievement
You explained the reason for your leave clearly, which is important.
coherence and cohesion
Your use of specific dates helps to clarify the timeframe needed for your leave.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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