The graph below shows the average houses prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the average houses prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average houses prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph compares the cost of houses in three regions, between 1997 and 2014.
Overall
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,the three prices experienced different trends in the time period.
While
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country
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A and
country
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B rise steeply,
country
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C stay stable. As the graph shows,
country
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A worth started at just under 250
thousand
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dollars
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in 1997 followed by a big increase to just above 500
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dollars
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in 2004.
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, it declined steadily until it fell to 500
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dollars
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in 2008. After it
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grown to 750
thousand
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dollars
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in 2014. Regarding prices of
country
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B began at just under 250
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dollars
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in 1997. It climbed with a small fluctuation to 250
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dollars
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in 2008.
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it rose to 500
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dollars
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in 2014.
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,
country
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C was just under 250 in 1997 and
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rose steeply to 250 in 2007. From 2007 to 2008 it has little drop to just under 250
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dollars
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but again it grows to 250
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dollars
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and stays steady until 2014.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, thousand, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steeply" was used 2 times.
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