in many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the Academic subjects, discussed the effect of this trend
Many nations
concerned
that Add a missing verb
are concerned
sports
and fitness classes are taken over by Use synonyms
the
academic Correct article usage
apply
subject
. My point of view is that Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
sports
classes Use synonyms
are played
Wrong verb form
play
significant
role in Add an article
a significant
the
student life.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
Linking Words
with
many schools are only focusing on Academic subjects, Add a comma
with,
however
, if Linking Words
student
is not good Add an article
the student
a student
in
studies, he makes Change preposition
at
Correct article usage
a carrier
carrier
in Correct your spelling
career
the
Correct article usage
apply
sport
fees. Change the noun form
sports
For instance
in Linking Words
Indian
cricket team. There are many players who are not taking admission Add an article
the Indian
an Indian
in
higher studies. They only focus on their games Change preposition
to
for
Change preposition
apply
them
or playing Correct pronoun usage
apply
sports
Use synonyms
help
to teach Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
team
about teamwork, leadership, and self-confidence, and Add an article
the team
also
prepare for challenges which we face in our life Linking Words
on the other hand
, manage students are Linking Words
studying
continuously for 5 to 6 hours daily. Their mental health is Wrong verb form
study
disturb
after Wrong verb form
disturbed
few
years. Correct article usage
a few
Moreover
, many students are studying over the computer. They become fatty Linking Words
from
his body. So if a school Change preposition
in
foster
Correct subject-verb agreement
fosters
Correct your spelling
an
and
environment that Correct your spelling
an
deprived
students Wrong verb form
deprives
to give
proper physical training, they may have Verb problem
of
take
less stress or Verb problem
apply
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
loss
Replace the word
lose
their
weight easily
Conclusion should Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
give Linking Words
important
to physical activities because many of them are not good Replace the word
importance
in
studies, so they are the best in their Change preposition
at
sports
and give peace or stressfree to the student edition to become fit from his bodyUse synonyms
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task achievement
Your introduction should clearly state your main idea. Try to elaborate a bit more on your viewpoint.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs flow logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas better.
task achievement
Make sure your conclusion summarizes your main points and restates your opinion clearly.
task achievement
You addressed the topic and provided examples.
task achievement
Some good points about the importance of sports were mentioned.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite