Some people believe that Vietnamese visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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travelling has become

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controversial

and many people think that

visitors

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should pay respect and act in accordance with the cultures of the

country

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they are going to. In my opinion, I partly agree with the statement above.

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essay will

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discuss

and give reasons as follows. First and foremost,

visitors

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who

follows

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the

tradition

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traditions

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of the

local

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locals

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will make the

atmospher

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atmosphere

more

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apply

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better in harmony and

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the

local

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locals

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to

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with the tourists.

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, local customs adoption helps

visitors

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to

intergrate

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integrate

into

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society more easily in other countries.

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, when

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act in an appropriate way

according to

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the place, the

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can better cooperate with the

local

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.

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, respecting local customs shows appreciation for the host culture and promotes goodwill among the locals. When the

visitors

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try to follow the tradition, the

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locals

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will respect and admire their

ethicity

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ethics

because they don't fear that foreigners will do

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harm

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to their traditions.

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, others feel that cultural differences should be welcomed as they enrich the diversity of the host

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, which is true because it helps to

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foster and

remove

unneccessary

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unnecessary

manners

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as superstition.

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can prevent the

country

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from following regulations

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false from the perspective of tourists. In conclusion, there is a balance to be found:

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should respect local customs

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also

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expressing their own culture because it is not only for the sake of the

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locals

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but

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makes the

visitors

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feel more welcomed and comfortable in visiting that

country

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.