The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
is illustrate
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illustrate
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the proportion of the community ages in two countries which are:
Yemen
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and Italy in 2000 and
prediction
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the prediction
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of the
2050year
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2050 year
. The categories
is
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are
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devided
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divided
into three: 0-14 years which are
adolescent
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adolescents
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, 15 - 59 years for
adults
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and more than 60 years for older
people
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.
Overall
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, in the
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beginning
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beginnings
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the
adults
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were started as more than
half
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or
half
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of the community in both
Yemen
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and Italy,
while
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older
people
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quarter
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were quarter
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or
or
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apply
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less.
On
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comparision
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comparison
,
the
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apply
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childhood is
half
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or less than
half
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.
In
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the end of the period, the statistics of
adults
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predicted to
declined
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decline
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in Italy,
on the other hand
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, increasing in
Yemen
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. In 2000, the pie charts of
Yemen
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is
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are
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devided
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divided
to
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into
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three, 50.1% for children and only 3.6 for older
people
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.
In contrast
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the
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apply
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Italy showed
higher
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a higher
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percentage of
adults
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which
is
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was
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57.3% in 2000. The percentage of late
people
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is
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spike by 36.6 percent points in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, adults, people, half with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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