The graph below shows the per capita consumption of whole milk and low-fat milk in the United States between 1970 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the per capita consumption of whole milk and low-fat milk in the United States between 1970 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the per capita consumption of whole milk and low-fat milk in the United States between 1970 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates whole
milk
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and low-fat
milk
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consumed by
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American
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Americans
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in
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apply
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between 1970 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
consumption
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of whole
milk
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exhibits
significant
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a significant
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reduction throughout the given period. Meanwhile, the
consumption
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of low-fat
milk
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was in higher
at
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apply
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the first half of the period before remained plateau in
second
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the second
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half of the period.
Quarter
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A quarter
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of
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American drink
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Americans drank
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whole
milk
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in 1970 and the trend gradually
reduce
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reduced
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to 14 per
capita
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in 1990 which
similar
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is similar
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with
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to
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low-fat
milk
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consumption
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.
Finally
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, in 2015, only 5
per
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per cent
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capita
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of
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American drink
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Americans drank
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whole
milk
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.
In contrast
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to low-fat
milk
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consumption
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, it
was
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apply
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started lower in 1970 which was 8 per
capita
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, but in 1990 the
America
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American
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people
were
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apply
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preferred to
consumed
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consume
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low-fat
milk
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which accounted for 14 per
capita
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. The figure
was maintain
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was maintained
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for 3 consecutive
year
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years
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before it
reduced
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was reduced
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to 13 per
capita
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in 2015. Low-fat
milk
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consumption
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among
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American
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Americans
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is more favourable compared to whole
milk
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in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, american, consumption, capita with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • comparison
  • preference
  • significant
  • decline
  • rise
  • trend
  • gradual
  • surpass
  • pattern
  • shift
  • healthier options
  • approximately
  • amount
  • between
  • overall
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