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: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides key information about how much the kilogram of
bananas
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 in the period between 1994 and 2004, in five of the biggest countries in the world.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the
price
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 in Japan was the highest in the period between 1994 and 2001.
In addition
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, banana sales show the biggest rise in
price
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 among the five countries in Japan in the year 1995,
whereas
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 the
price
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 of
bananas
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 in the USA was the lowest in the given ten-year period.
According to
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 what is shown, in Japan, there was a sharp increase in the cost of
bananas
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 between 1994 to 1995. the
price
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 reached the highest value approximately 3
dollars
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 per kilogram. But the graph shows a sharp decline from 1995 to 1996 almost 2
dollars
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. The figure shows a continuous rais in the cost of a kilogram of
bananas
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 from 1997 until 1999. In France and Germany, there was a balance in banana cost in the years between 1994 and 1999 around 1.75 and 1.50
dollars
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 per kg respectively.
However
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, in 2001, the Sale
price
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 in France increased and became the highest in all four countries almost 1.75
dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, price, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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