The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
expenditure
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of
UAE
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the UAE
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government
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from a total budget of AED 315
billion
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in 2000. The money was distributed
into
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10 main sectors in the country.
Overall
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, the
government
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spent most of the budget on social security.
In addition
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,
expenditure
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on transportation was the least. Social security was the main concern for the
government
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to look after, which received AED 100
billion
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followed by health and personal social services which accounted for AED 53
billion
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.
Expenditure
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for education received
moderate
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a moderate
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amount which was
one third
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from
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of
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social security.
In contrast
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,
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government
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the government
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has less priority towards transportation, which received the least budget in 2000 which was AED 9 million only.
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Expenditure
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Expenditures
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for law and order, industry agriculture and employment, defence, housing and
evironment
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environment
and other
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expenditure
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expenditures
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were almost similar and accounted for ranging from AED 13-23
billion
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.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, government, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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