The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the process of instant
noodles
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manufacturing. In the first
stage
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of processing, the flour is transported by trucks from storage silos to the industry,
then
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is added with water and oil into a mixer
on
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the
initial end
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of
a
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processing line. When fully mixed, the raw material is flattened into long dough sheets through the rollers below the mixer. The dough sheets are cut into
dough
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strips before
compressed
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into
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noodles
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discs. In the next
stage
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, vegetables and spices are added into the cups after the
noodles
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discs we get are cooked in an oil tank in the
semblly
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seminary
line and dried. The
last
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step is sealing those cups filled with
noodles
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and labelling them with commercial labels. After experiencing shaping the raw material into
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noodles
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noodle
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discs in the first
stage
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and getting the whole wrapped in the second manufacturing
stage
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,we get the final products of delicious instant food that can be sold in the
supermakets
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supermarkets
.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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