IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays
, an increasing
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number
 of people refuse to buy physical
books
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 to read. Some of them think that it is free for everyone to read
books
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 online. Actually, I totally agree that nobody will purchase
books
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 to read. Mobile phones and computers are owned by everyone because almost
everythings
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everything
,
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 which
are
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 done in
the
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ordinary days
,
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need
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 to be
complished
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completed
 on the
websists
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websites
. At the same time, we can download a lot of things from the
websists
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websites
 and add them
on
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 our computer desktop in order to use them easily. We can download these reading apps and read the considerable
books
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, which you
ought
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 to spend a lot of money on
them
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. We do not need to carry these heavy
books
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 to our offices because we can find almost every
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books
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book
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 on the apps. If you want to read to kill the time or have fun on your
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travelling
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 road, you can only take your mobile phone and read
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instead
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 of
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out them
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them out
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 from the bags,
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which
 is full of
somethings
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something
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 for
the
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ordinary life. 
Although
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 these
books
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 have the value of
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, the
convince
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convenience
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 of reading is
th
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the
 main trend for
the
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public willingness. No one
want
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wants
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 to look
though
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through
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 a lot of
books
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 in the
libraries
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library
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 because they think it is a kind of method to waste their time. Everyone can get the latest news and the knowledge
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the goole
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Google
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. It is a
neccessary
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necessary
 trend to develop. 
Overall
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, I believe that
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the
 printed newspapers and
books
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 will be replaced by
the
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apply
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mobile phones and computers in the future.

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structure
Plan your essay. Say your view in the first line. Put your ideas in order with 3 short parts: intro, two body paragraphs, and a end.
content
Give one or two clear reasons. If you use an example, keep it simple and still true.
language
Use easy words. Check spell and form. Keep short sentences.
idea
The idea that reading online is a main trend is clear.
structure
There is some use of linking words in places.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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