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sending offenders to jail. I am totally
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To commence with, folks who believe that education and
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that it helps them to develop new skills that increase their chances of finding a job after release.
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makes them more employable.
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of reoffending because criminals are
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better prepared for the workforce.
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only not helps offenders but society too.
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rehabilitation greatly reduces reoffending rates.
In conclusion, providing educational and vocational
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is a more effective method to deal with lawbreakers than alone punishment.
will
lead to safer communities and lower rates of reoffending.