Topic: The bar chart below shows the number of men and women studying engineering at Australian universities. Summarise the information in the chart by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

Topic: The bar chart below shows the number of men and women studying engineering at Australian universities. Summarise the information in the chart by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Topic: The bar chart below shows the number of men and women studying engineering at Australian universities. Summarise the information in the chart by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the amount of male and female learning engineering at Australian universities in three different years,
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apart (1992, 2002, 2012).
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, the number of
men
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studying engineering was significantly more than that of women over the period.
However
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, we can observe
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trend in the amount of
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females
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studying the same discipline. With regard to
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men
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, engineering was
initially
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far more popular
to
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this
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gender than
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an
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the
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opposite one.
This
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fact is clearly demonstrated in
year
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the year
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1992,
where
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when
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men
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accounted for 14000 and women only for 2000. In the following years, 2002 and 2012,
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this
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the
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statistics of
men
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learning engineering decreased to 12000
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but stood at the same level for both years.
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, women’s interest in engineering was not high at the beginning, only 2000 girls in 1992. But, it showed
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increase over the period given. In 2002, we see that
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figure doubled reaching 4000, which was 1\3 of the
men
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’s number in the same year.
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, in 2012, women constituted
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the
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half of the
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of
men
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studying
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program in a respective year, getting to 6000 females.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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