The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line chart provides key information from 1967 to 2007 average carbon dioxide in the United
Kingdom
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,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal.
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, it is clear from the graph that at the beginning the United
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had the highest average person in the most time.
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,
Sweden
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has a giant rise between 1967 and 1977.
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, the United
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has a slightly
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and about equivalent with the United
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in 1977.
According to
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what is shown,
Sweden
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has a notable jumped approximately 11 through 1977.
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, the United
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had slightly declined to around 11 in 1977.
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, Italy and Portugal have grown almost from 4.2 to 6 and 1 to 2 respectively. In terms of, United
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had stay dropped to almost 9 in 2007.
Sweden
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's had a significant decrease in 2007 but Italy and Portugal had grown
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nearly 8 and 5.
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Italy's remained between 1997 to 2007 and
Portugal
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Portugal's
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modest
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modestly
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increased approximately 5.5 to 6 in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words kingdom, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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