The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The line chart provides key information from 1967 to 2007 average carbon dioxide in the United

Kingdom

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Sweden

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, Italy and Portugal.

Overall

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, it is clear from the graph that at the beginning the United

Kingdom

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had the highest average person in the most time.

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Sweden

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has a giant rise between 1967 and 1977.

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, the United

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has a slightly

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and about equivalent with the United

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in 1977.

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what is shown,

Sweden

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has a notable jumped approximately 11 through 1977.

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, the United

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had slightly declined to around 11 in 1977.

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, Italy and Portugal have grown almost from 4.2 to 6 and 1 to 2 respectively. In terms of, United

Kingdom

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had stay dropped to almost 9 in 2007.

Sweden

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's had a significant decrease in 2007 but Italy and Portugal had grown

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nearly 8 and 5.

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Italy's remained between 1997 to 2007 and

Portugal

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Portugal's

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modest

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modestly

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increased approximately 5.5 to 6 in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words kingdom, sweden with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Some people think that to lead a successful life, a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this case ? do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.