Some dwellers consider that living in urban
areas
can have more benefits on Use synonyms
life
, and others believe that living in rural Use synonyms
areas
is more beneficial to Use synonyms
health
. From my perspective, living in Use synonyms
cities
is a better choice which can have more advantages on Use synonyms
health
and Use synonyms
life
.
Advocates of countryside Use synonyms
life
often highlight the natural environment and slow pace of Use synonyms
life
. The environment in rural Use synonyms
areas
is more clean and less polluted, which keeps individuals away from diseases. Use synonyms
People
living in undeveloped Use synonyms
areas
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example, may consume pure water and food without poison in comparison Add the comma(s)
, for
of
city dwellers, which may lead to a longer lifetime. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, countryside Linking Words
life
usually contains more physical activity, Use synonyms
such
as gardening, which helps Linking Words
people
to have enough exercise. Use synonyms
As a result
, it can prevent individuals from being obese and reduce the risk of Linking Words
related-diseases
.
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related diseases
In contrast
, supporters of city-Linking Words
life
living point out the availability of Use synonyms
health
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,
and Remove the comma
apply
health
-related services. Most Use synonyms
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apply
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health
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the health
situate
in Change the form of the verb
situated
cities
, no matter clinics or medical Use synonyms
centers
, which helps the citizens to be more available to these facilities. Change the spelling
centres
Therefore
, dwellers in Linking Words
cities
can be cured in time and prevent Use synonyms
from
death, even if emergencies occur. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, Linking Words
health
-related services are more popular in Use synonyms
cities
. Use synonyms
For example
, citizens can visit gyms easily and choose exercises, which are suitable for them, Linking Words
such
as yoga for the elderly. Linking Words
People
can Use synonyms
also
purchase organic daily consumptions from supermarketsLinking Words
,
and even have suggestions Remove the comma
apply
of
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for
the
diets from nutritionists, which can Correct article usage
apply
leads
to Change the verb form
lead
more
healthier diets.
In conclusion, the advantages of living in rural Change the word
apply
areas
are the availability Use synonyms
to
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of
the
healthier environment and sufficient Correct article usage
a
physic
activities, Correct your spelling
physics
while
the benefits of having a city Linking Words
life
are the convenience Use synonyms
to
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of
the
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apply
health
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centers
and Change the spelling
centres
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health related
services. In my opinion, it is more important to be cured immediately, no matter small diseases or emergencies, Add a hyphen
health-related
while
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people
can still obtain unpolluted food in Use synonyms
cities
through organic shops. Use synonyms
Therefore
, living in Linking Words
cities
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have
more advantages from my perspective.Correct subject-verb agreement
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