The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Linking Words

This

Correct determiner usage

The

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graph above

illustracte

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illustrates

a bar chart of four different types of

transportion

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transportation

and the

persentage

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percentage

of using them in 1960, 1980, and 2000 and

contrast

Wrong verb form

contrasting

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them. which is the train,

cars

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, tubes, and the bus. the trains in the 80s his a big

persenage

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percentage

nearly

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of nearly

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passenger

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passengers

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the other hand, in

the

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apply

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2000 the percentage decreased.

compare

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compared

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to the

cars

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ascending increase

especially

Add the comma(s)

, especially

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at 2000. The tubes the highest year was 1960. In the

last

Linking Words

, buss

demonstrate

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demonstrates

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the tallest bar in the 60s, but after

that

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that,

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the graph shows ascend decrease. In 1980 the Trains and

bus

Fix the agreement mistake

buses

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are

Verb problem

had

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approximately the same

percent

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percentage

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of passengers. In 2000 the chief in the chart is the

cars

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to sum

Linking Words

Add a comma

up,

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the

topmust

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top most

transportion

Correct your spelling

transportation

is the buss and the

cars

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overall

Linking Words

these four

trasportion

Correct your spelling

transactions

did not go up more than 40

percet

Correct your spelling

per cent

Change preposition

show examples

both 1960,1980, and 2000.

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Jul 1, 2025

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

145 words

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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Some argue that having substantial wealth and limited leisure time is preferable to having less money but more free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people depends on newspapers, radios, television and the internet for news and information. Which in your opinion is the best way for getting news and why?

Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that money cannot buy happiness. Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?

Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of foods imported from countries all across the world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?