Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only For instance, and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is often argued that individuals are less

to

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bring about

enviromental

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environmental

improvement,

whereas

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major

companies

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can make a significant impact to sustain the

environment

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. In my opinion,

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individual

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individuals

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have

an

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ability to sustain the

environment

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, Big

companies

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have more key roles to make a significant change. On the one hand, People can contribute to

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and

rise

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the quality of environmental issues.

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can be done by people’s daily habits to reduce

carbon

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the carbon

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footprint that

contribute

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to climate change and global warming.

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example

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, using electric

car

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cars

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rather than fossil fuel vehicles and switching off unused electricity.

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reducing the usage of technology that generates

pollute

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pollution

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,

the

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green space can be built and

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.

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for.

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example

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, people attend the reforestation events in their country.

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companies

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play a crucial role

to sustain

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in sustaining

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the

environment

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in the long term because of the

producing

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production of

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toxic

waste

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by factories.

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issue can be done by

companies

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with having a proper

waste

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treatment system that can minimize the risk of

waste

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product

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products

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.

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example

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,

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apply

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waste

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products that contain toxic

chemical

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chemicals

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are processed with appropriate treatment until the chemical

disappear

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before

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release

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to

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into

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the air or water.

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corporate

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can produce and promote

the

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new

innovation

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innovations

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of

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in

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technology

that

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is

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are

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environmentally

and

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apply

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friedly

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friendly

to the

environment

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.

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example

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, to reduce the carbon emission in the earth,

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stop developing

the

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apply

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fossil fuel

car

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instead

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of electric

car

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that

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is

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are

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not harmful to the air. In conclusion, Though

i

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I

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agree that

Individual

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Individuals

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have

a

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the

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power to preserve the earth from degradation by doing

campaign

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campaigns

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and using eco-friendly technology,

i

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think, the major

companies

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is

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are

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the main player

to sustain

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in sustaining

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the earth in the long run with their capacity to process the

waste

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product and develop technologies that can reduce pollution.