Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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has been
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in many countries in the world. Some argue that
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penalty should be reserved for serious
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crime
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, but others believe that it should not be used.
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both views. Capital
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is a legal process where a person is executed as
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for a serious
crime
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as murder,
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terrorism
and human trafficking.
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is a fair
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for the perpetrators
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the
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that they have been convicted
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The victims and family members may
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the trauma
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from the incidents involved. By having
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kind of legal sentence, it can
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traumatic
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to the victims.
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,
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can give
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example to the other people for not doing
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crime
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as well. In certain
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crime
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crimes
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involving
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, it is better not to execute
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penalty. Other methods of
punishment
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can be applied
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as placement in
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special schools for rehabilitation.
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can be the best option because they
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long
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way to go in their life. During
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process, they can
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with
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community activities
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as collecting rubbish in
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public
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,
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however
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it should be done under
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strict supervision by the
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.
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, Henry Gurney Schools in Malaysia was built as a rehabilitation centre for
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student
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that has
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to be guilty by the court. In conclusion, capital
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should be executed based on
seriousness
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the seriousness
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of the crimes that
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been convicted in consideration
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the age of the assailants. Chances need to be given to
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young people because they are still in the learning process of life.

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Task Achievement
Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and summarize it in the conclusion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the flow of ideas by using linking words like 'firstly', 'moreover', and 'finally'.
Task Achievement
Add more relevant examples to support each argument. This will help to make your points clearer.
Content
You have a good understanding of the topic and discuss both views well.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • deterrent
  • crime
  • serious offenses
  • justice
  • victims
  • closure
  • life imprisonment
  • rehabilitation
  • legal system
  • fairness
  • wrongful convictions
  • moral
  • public opinion
  • perspectives
  • debate
  • effective
  • punishment
  • families
  • contribute
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