In a number countries, some people think that it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other belives that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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people think it is necessary to invest large amounts of

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into the construction of new

railway

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lines for fast

travel

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between cities. Others argue that the

money

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is better

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on improving the existing transport.

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essay wants to discuss both views and show why

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believe working on existing lines is more

cost efficient

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. On the one hand, many

trains

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that go between big cities are slowed down

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regional

trains

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stopping in every other village.

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could be prevented by building new tracks reserved for fast

trains

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only stopping at busy

railway

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stations.

Travel

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time can be shortened, the risk of late arrival diminishes and

travel

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by

train

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becomes more attractive.

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, more people would

travel

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by

train

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, which in return helps the climate and

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traffic on the streets.

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, building new

railway

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tracks costs a

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of

money

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, requires a

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of planning

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infrastructure behind it and each track takes several years

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build.

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, using existing tracks leaves the opportunity

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improvement of those lines.

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can be achieved by spending the

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on new tracks around small

train

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stations where the fast

trains

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can´t stop.

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, regional

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could wait for the intercity

train

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to overtake them at

railway

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stations.

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allows both the slow and fast

trains

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to use the same tracks and saves a

lot

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of

money

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on track building.

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,

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requires a

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of planning routes between slow and fast

trains

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, but

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the same benefits which new tracks give,

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also

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saving a

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of

money

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. In conclusion,

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new tracks improve the

travel

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times significantly, it only makes

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sense

if there are enough people taking the

train

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to cover the cost. Rebuilding existing tracks can save a

lot

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of

money

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and with the right planning improve intercity

travel

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as well. I firmly believe that improving the tracks is a much more

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approach for nearly the same results.