You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.

Dear Sir , I am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention

about

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book

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that I read

last

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week which is about the city of Cambridge .The

book

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was published by you and the name of the

book

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is Heritage Culture of Cambridge City .

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that was a very interesting

book

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however

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, some false information I found in that

book

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which

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makes no sense. My name is Harvi and I have been living at 53 Munch Avenue Cambridge for the past 7 years

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I am aware

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the culture, tradition and

the

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amenities that are provided by the government to make it exquisite and exorbitant. You wrote in your

book

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about the holy

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of a Sikh community that they did not allow people from other religions to visit

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immaculate

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but

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place

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is open 24 hours for everyone

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, individuals get a chance to eat free food

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sitting together

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, it brings a sense of brotherhood . I want you to rewrite the true facts about

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spectacular

place

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so people will get

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information so they can visit there and enjoy the authenticity and peaceful environment and encourage others to do the same. We can arrange a meeting to discuss

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information at your convenience and you can contact me on my personal phone which is 556778889999. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

Kaurharvinder2984

Jul 2, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on one main idea to improve clarity.

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Use a more formal greeting and closing for a professional tone.

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You provided clear and specific incorrect information from the book.

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The letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is great.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

237 words

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