Some expert believe that ia better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Many scientists feel that teaching children another
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at primary school has more benefits than in secondary.It is easier for individuals to learn at
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age,
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it may reduce the intensity of concentration on other subjects and will not let them use their native
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. Younger ages have the ability to learn, as their minds are still fresh and capable of receiving information more than adults, which will make the process of learning easier, and
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produce new logical thinking.
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teaching them a foreign
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will make a miss consumption
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between their native
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taught, and will use both
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speaking, along to study was done on children who were receiving two languages ,
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ability to form a full and flawless sentence was less compared with those who were just put their focus on their native
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the focus on essential subjects like math and science could lose their intensity since they are more crucial than new languages which leads to reducing the balance
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needed,
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, expert teachers are in demand since they have to use different ways and styles to deliver the information.
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, teaching a new
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has it is benefits and disadvantages and taking them beside before making an important decision is crucial for both the child and his family.

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Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and summarize it in the conclusion.
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Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to guide the reader.
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Provide specific examples to support your points, such as studies or surveys rather than general statements.
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You have addressed both advantages and disadvantages, which is good for a balanced essay.
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Your introduction presents the topic well and includes the main idea.

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