The tаblе and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in оnе аrеа of Britain. The tаblе shows where the mоnеу саtе from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tаblе and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in оnе аrеа of Britain. The tаblе shows where the mоnеу саtе from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The tаblе and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in оnе аrеа of Britain. The tаblе shows where the mоnеу саtе from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The histogram and tabulation
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the
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data about the amount of money which was allocated to police and how it was utilised by them in two years, 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, the budget is covered by
majorily
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two
sources
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major sources
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i.e. the National Government and Local Taxes,
on the other
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hand
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it is mostly spent on providing salaries to the employees.
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taking a closer look at the pie chart it depicts that
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the maximum money in general is used for salaries of officers and staff, still a percentage of 6% has been used less from 2017 to 2018.
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, that 6% is utilised in improving the technology and has been invested in
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.
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the utilisation for building and transport remains constant for the two years. The table depicts that in total there was an increase of 13.9m which majorly came from the contribution of local taxes, which started at 91.2m and ended at 102.3m.
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the national government's budget had a marginal increase
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2.3m,
ended
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and ended
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at 177.8m.
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the grants from other sources had almost remained constant, with a start of 38m and later saw a rise of just 0.5m by 2018.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget
  • funding sources
  • income
  • distribution
  • allocation
  • government grants
  • local taxes
  • expenses
  • operational costs
  • administration
  • community programs
  • salaries
  • law enforcement
  • financial trends
  • comparative analysis
  • implications
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