The histogram and tabulation
provides
Change the verb form
provide
the
data about the amount of money which was allocated to police and how it was utilised by them in two years, 2017 and 2018. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the budget is covered by Linking Words
majorily
two Correct word choice
apply
sources
i.e. the National Government and Local Taxes, Correct word choice
major sources
on the other
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hand
it is mostly spent on providing salaries to the employees.
Add the comma(s)
hand,
While
taking a closer look at the pie chart it depicts that Linking Words
although
the maximum money in general is used for salaries of officers and staff, still a percentage of 6% has been used less from 2017 to 2018. Linking Words
In contrast
, that 6% is utilised in improving the technology and has been invested in Linking Words
same
. Correct article usage
the same
While
the utilisation for building and transport remains constant for the two years.
The table depicts that in total there was an increase of 13.9m which majorly came from the contribution of local taxes, which started at 91.2m and ended at 102.3m. Linking Words
Whereas
the national government's budget had a marginal increase Linking Words
by
2.3m, Change preposition
of
ended
at 177.8m. Correct word choice
and ended
While
the grants from other sources had almost remained constant, with a start of 38m and later saw a rise of just 0.5m by 2018.Linking Words