It is believed that
conserve
many Wrong verb form
conserving
bird
and wildlife has been attracting too much attention Fix the agreement mistake
birds
as well as
social resources. I personally agree with Linking Words
Correct article usage
the opionion
opionion
.
I think there are two main reasons Correct your spelling
opinion
explains
why people pay attention to animal protection. The first reason is that Verb problem
apply
has
a variety non - governmental Unnecessary verb
apply
organization
around the world Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
was
established to preserve many Correct subject-verb agreement
were
animal
. Change to a plural noun
animals
However
, they worry too much about Linking Words
animal related
Add a hyphen
animal-related
activies
Correct your spelling
activities
the
different fields around the world. Change preposition
in the
For example
, PETA- the first organization Linking Words
protect
Fix the infinitive
to protect
animal
, Fix the agreement mistake
animals
which
it was quite unreasonable to condemn the female singer Katy Perry when she Correct pronoun usage
apply
uses
tiger and elephant images in her Wrong verb form
used
muúic
video for her song “Roar” for commercial purposes Correct your spelling
music
Linking Words
while
she Correct word choice
when
no
Add a missing verb
had no
such
purposes. Linking Words
Furthermore
, many Linking Words
article
Change to a plural noun
articles
write
about wildlife can be shared instantly on social media. If a bear is imprisoned somewhere, these articles will immediately spread widely on networks like Facebook.
Wrong verb form
written
In addition
, citizens dedicate too many Linking Words
reéources
so as to conserve wildlife. Correct your spelling
resources
Firstly
, any project Linking Words
preserve
wild Fix the infinitive
to preserve
bird
Fix the agreement mistake
birds
also
requires a not small amount of money to be able to do it, in which infrastructure and especially for rare and endangered animals. Linking Words
For instance
, the costs of DNA research or habitat restoration are extremely high. Linking Words
Secondly
, the consumption of certain animal products may have minimal impact on the ecosystem. In many regions, local people still rely on using some natural resources from wild animals for food or traditional medicine.
In conclusion, I believe that in today’s world, too much attention and resources are being devoted to the protection of birds and wild animals.Linking Words