The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school nơ. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (HA)

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school nơ. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (HA)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school nơ. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (HA)
The given map illustrates the transformation of the educational area from 1985 to
present
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the present
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day. Looking at the map with a general view, the arrangement of the current school was more clear than the one in the past. It was renovated more modernly
while
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learning rooms were expanded and appeared in more areas.
Therefore
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, the amount of students registering for
this
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experienced a dramatic increase at present.
Firstly
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, in the north of the schoolyard was a rectangular car park in 1985 with a road surrounding it, connecting an entrance and an exit,
however
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;
this
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has been changed into a semicircular shape
along with
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the road,
while
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another small car park in its southwest has been removed. On the left side of the images, the office remained unchanged for more than 30 years.
In contrast
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, to the south of it, the library was demolished and was replaced by a learning resources centre integrating a small computer room inside. In the previous, there were only 2 zones for students to study but it was expanded
another
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educational building at the moment. Meanwhile, the two-storey classroom block has been added with another level.
Additionally
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, the south side of the school place was mainly occupied by the playing fields in 1985, which have been smaller, allowing the construction of a new physical complex including a pool and a fitness centre on the west of the playing fields.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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