The graph demonstrates how many tourists visited Caribbean islands over the 7-year period.
In addition
, there are Linking Words
separated
data about people who are landed and Replace the word
separate
whose
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those
are
staying on cruise ships.
Correct pronoun usage
who are
Overall
, the number of total island visitors has significantly increased. Linking Words
However
, in the Linking Words
last
years of the given period, the growth of tourism occurred mostly Linking Words
due to
a rise Linking Words
of
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in
transfer
of water Correct article usage
the transfer
transports
.
In detail, at the Fix the agreement mistake
transport
beginning
only 1 million tourists arrived Add a comma
beginning,
to
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in
Caribbean
and around 80% of them landed to explore these islands, Correct article usage
the Caribbean
while
others stayed on ships. Following years, the number of people wishing to discover the land gradually rose, but at the same time, in Linking Words
2012
there was Punctuation problem
2012,
the
a fall Correct article usage
apply
of
cruise visitors.
Afterwards, Change preposition
in
although
the general trend of tourism showed a growth Linking Words
riched
more than 3.5 million annual Verb problem
reaching
visiting
, the number of people who physically stayed on the islands Replace the word
visitors
have
not Correct subject-verb agreement
has
exceed
more than 1,5 Wrong verb form
exceeded
millions
since 2013.Fix the agreement mistake
million