The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Ulvi)

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Ulvi)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Ulvi)
The graph demonstrates how many tourists visited Caribbean islands over the 7-year period.
In addition
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, there are
separated
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separate
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data about people who are landed and
whose
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those
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are
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who are
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staying on cruise ships.
Overall
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, the number of total island visitors has significantly increased.
However
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, in the
last
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years of the given period, the growth of tourism occurred mostly
due to
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a rise
of
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in
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transfer
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the transfer
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of water
transports
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transport
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. In detail, at the
beginning
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beginning,
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only 1 million tourists arrived
to
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in
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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and around 80% of them landed to explore these islands,
while
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others stayed on ships. Following years, the number of people wishing to discover the land gradually rose, but at the same time, in
2012
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2012,
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there was
the
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apply
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a fall
of
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in
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cruise visitors. Afterwards,
although
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the general trend of tourism showed a growth
riched
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reaching
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more than 3.5 million annual
visiting
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visitors
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, the number of people who physically stayed on the islands
have
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has
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not
exceed
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exceeded
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more than 1,5
millions
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million
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since 2013.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourists
  • island
  • number
  • increase
  • decrease
  • year
  • 2010
  • 2011
  • 2012
  • 2013
  • 2014
  • 2015
  • 2016
  • 2017
  • attract
  • destination
  • popular
  • rise
  • sharp
  • low
  • high
  • point
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