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in
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of
which
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apply
Japapnese
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Japanese
tourist
travelling Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
to
abroad Change preposition
apply
in
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over
a
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the
decade
, Correct word choice
past decade
while
the other line graph depicts the Linking Words
Japanese
tourism to Australia from a Use synonyms
year
1984 to 1985.
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Overall
, The Linking Words
Japanese
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was traveled
in ten years Verb problem
travellers
was
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apply
marginally increased
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increased marginally
with
around 10 Change preposition
by
million
tourists, Use synonyms
while
the line graph shows Linking Words
the
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that the
data
Check wording
number
in
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of
which
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apply
Japanese
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visit
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visitors to
Austarlia
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Australia
was
Verb problem
apply
also
significantly increased over the decade.
Linking Words
To begin
with, Linking Words
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Fix capitalization
the
Japanese
people Use synonyms
was
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were
rised
gradually till Correct your spelling
rose
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year
1990 Correct article usage
the year
at
above 10 Change preposition
to
million
people, after that it Use synonyms
was raising
slowly till 1994. After Verb problem
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that
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that,
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rose
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went
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travelers
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year
1994, so Correct article usage
the year
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the japanese
japanese
started travelling more Fix capitalization
Japanese
from
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over
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last
10 years.
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the last
Furthermore
, Linking Words
Japanese
who visited Australia from Use synonyms
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year
1984 to 1995 Check wording
apply
was
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apply
also
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gained
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increased
with
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at
noticeable
rate, from Correct article usage
a noticeable
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year
1984 it Check wording
apply
was
climbed to 2 Verb problem
apply
million
people Use synonyms
till
1985. Change preposition
apply
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that it went
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it
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slightly in
next
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the next
year
. Use synonyms
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again
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apply
following
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the following
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and finished at Use synonyms
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a whooping
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whopping
million
passengers in Use synonyms
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year
1994.Correct article usage
the year