You recently bought a product, but you are not satisfied with it. Write a letter to the company that made the product. In your letter: •Describe the product you bought •Explain why you are not satisfied with it •Suggest what the company should do to fix the problem

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the product that

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purchased from your website

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week. It was a hair curler with distinct features and

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with 2 different curling accessories. I am highly dissatisfied with the product as it is not heating up properly. When

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received it and opened the package, there was no warranty card in it.

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tried to curl my hair, but it didn't work and made my hair frizzy.

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, the power button is

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not working. Whenever

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try to turn it on, it gives me

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. I tried calling customer service,

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nobody answers

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I heard that you have

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marketing image among other

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sellers

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seller

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seller,

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that's why

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bought it from you.

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, I had a bad experience. I would really appreciate it

somebody

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if somebody

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look

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into

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matter as soon as

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possible

. I will be really thankful to you if my product

will be

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replaced

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with

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one

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can i

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please

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warranty card? Your's

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faithfully

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, Sim.