The bar charts below show the prevelance of obesity among boys and girls aged 12-19 years by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014

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the data is categorised on the basis of ethnicity in the United States from 2004 to 2014.

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, a higher

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of obese youngsters were from the

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Hispanic

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Black and the

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background

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few children belonged to the

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exposed to the issue. In terms of males, in 2004, the

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of affected populations constituted 12 per

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for the

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White, 11 per

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of

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Black and 13 per

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of

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people.

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, in 2014, the percentage of the first and the second group accounted for an increase

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and 9 per

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, respectively.

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, a significant part of

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men were impacted by obesity, causing the figure

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to 27 per

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from 13 per

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in a decade.

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, in 2004, 9 per

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of the

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females were

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the disorder.

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representation rose gradually to 14 per

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in the next ten years.

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, there was a dramatic uplift in the obese

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Black girls from 16 per

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to 29 per

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in 2014.

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, the

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of the growth of the illness in

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ladies levelled up

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proportion

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of

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White individuals.