In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In many parts of the world, people are moving to city
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from rural
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of a country to find better jobs, education and healthcare.
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, the population in the rural
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is going down.
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, the city
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have become overcrowded. In my opinion,
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is a negative development because it creates
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for both cities and rural
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. One of the main reasons is that it has reduced the skilled population in rural
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. So, food production in
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area is decreasing
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, which is impacting the country's economy.
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, more young people are moving from rural
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in India. So, the population of rural
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is decreasing, which has reduced farming and food production.
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has had a greater impact on the country’s economy. Another reason is that the cities are becoming more overcrowded
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, many
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have increased , like higher living costs, air pollution and healthcare
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. Schools, colleges and hospitals have become overcrowded
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unusual movements. It has increased mental
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reduced quality of life.
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makes life more stressful and difficult for everyone living in the cities. In conclusion,
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there are some benefits of
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trend, I think the
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result is negative. Because
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there are some serious challenges like health
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, education
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, environmental
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, etc. Countries should try to develop rural
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so people do not feel the need to leave these
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Make sure your introduction gives a clear overview of your opinion, stating both sides briefly if you mention benefits.
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Use more examples and details to support your main ideas, especially in the second paragraph.
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Your essay has a clear opinion throughout, which is important for this topic.
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You provided relevant examples which help to support your points about rural areas and cities.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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