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crime
in the UK in Use synonyms
previous
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the previous
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the graph illustrates the relationship between Linking Words
age
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crime
, Use synonyms
pie
chart represents the types of Correct article usage
the pie
crime
.
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crime
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age
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was violent Use synonyms
crime
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others
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, the
crime
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thousands
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age
the Use synonyms
crime
rate rapidly dropped to 20 Use synonyms
thousands
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age
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then
started decreasing steadily, accounting for Linking Words
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crime
.
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crimes
crime
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, drug and property Linking Words
crime
were almost equal, standing at 22% and 23% respectively. Use synonyms
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crime
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all
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the
proportion
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total proportion