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Psychologists have known for many years that color can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention to be given to color schemes when decorating work places such as offices and hospitals. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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Introduction
The
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color
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colour
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 should be
create
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created
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 to
impact
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evoke
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 positive or negative
emotion´s
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emotion in
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 people. In
decoration
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the decoration
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insdrustry
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industry
,
colors
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colours
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has
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have
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 been the crucial player abound
desing
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design
. In
this
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essay
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extent
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 my personal opinion.
Body paragraph 1
Firsly
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Firstly
,
Professionals
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professional
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 experts in human behaviers, has been realiced a lot of research around the
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color
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colour
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.
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, has been determined how much influence each
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color
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colour
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 to each person.
For
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this
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 reason, some
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color
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colours
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 represent one specific
emocion
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emotion
.
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, red is a
pasion
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passionate
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color
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colour
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 and blue is a sure
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color
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colour
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.
Body paragraph 2
In
adition
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addition
, the decision
for
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to
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 choose than
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color
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colour
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identify
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to identify
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 one space is crucial to create
different
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a different
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 experience
in
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for
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 other people.
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example
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example,
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 in a
desing
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design
 office should be useful
have
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to have
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a
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apply
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vibrant
colors
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colours
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than
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rather than
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 a medical office.
Conclusion
I agree
about
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that
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 the
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color
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colour
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 can
be
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apply
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affect feeling in people
becouse
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because
,
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apply
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colors
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colours
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to
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for
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puntual
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particular
situation
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situations
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 and
emotion
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emotions
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. In my
cause
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case
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blank
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, blank
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 is a sad and dark
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color
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colour
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, and
for
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this
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 reason is used
to
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apply
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in funerals. On
other
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the other
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 hand, in
decorating
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the decorating
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sector
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sector,
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 the
ligth
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light
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color
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colours
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usually are
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are usually
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sinonims
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synonymous
of
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with
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 clean and calm.

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task achievement
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Your topic is interesting and relevant.
task achievement
You show understanding of the impact of colors on emotions.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • affect
  • feel
  • color
  • mood
  • happy
  • calm
  • work
  • hospital
  • office
  • energy
  • trust
  • reliability
  • healthy
  • freshness
  • productivity
  • personal
  • preference
  • different
  • meaning
  • cultural
  • perception
  • decor
  • employees
  • clients
  • environment
  • anxiety
  • vibrant
  • motivate
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